I came across your marketing materials a few days ago and was impressed enough to visit your website to get more information.
Wow. And I don’t necessarily mean that in a good way.
Don’t get me wrong. You’ve obviously put a lot into your startup – a lot of time, energy, thought, maybe even money. You’ve taken a big step into the often scary world of marketing your business on the Internet, and you are to be congratulated for your pluck and forward thinking. The absolute last thing I want to do is discourage you.
But while your website is very attractive aesthetically (the logo is particularly cool), I’m afraid it’s not doing you many favors from a marketing standpoint.
How can I say that? Well, consider these points: